A Proper Poking

PHOTO PROMPT - © Rochelle Wisoff-Fields

PHOTO PROMPT – © Rochelle Wisoff-Fields

“I daresay, you should give it a poking.”

“What a saucy lass you are. Get on the bed and I shall give you a proper poking.”

Danielle fluttered her eyelids and hid her expression. The Duke’s attentions could mean an escape from the kitchen. Who knew? Maybe even nurse… and a room upstairs. But she had to keep his interest.

“Good sir, perhaps instead of the peaches, you’d prefer something sweeter.”

“And what do you recommend?”

“Perhaps a cherry?”

Below, an ambulance blared by the hotel and the Duke broke character. “Can we just get naked? Our reservation’s at 8:00.”

 

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26 Comments

  1. Playfully excellent, as always. Nice to see you back here.

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  2. LOL – Didn’t expect that twist at the end there…Impatient Duke! Nicely done.

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  3. LOL 😀 Damned ambulance. 😛

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  4. A time schedule..how romantic..kind of like a poking.

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  5. Alas for that poor lass.. the world is full of dukes in a hurry…

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  6. Laughing out loud, literally! I’m not sure the poor lass will be quite as wiling to break character – just getting naked – takes all the fun out of it. 🙂

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  7. micklively

    Economics and frolicking: never a good mix.

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  8. Made me smile! The “duke” shouldn’t break out of the roleplay just because of ambulances and whatnot. What was he thinking? 🙂

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  9. Excellent! Life intrudes rudely sometimes.

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  10. Nothing like a little naughty role-playing to spice up the old marriage, huh? Cute! 😉

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  11. The Duke seems a little excited. I hope it’s not premature to speculate that he may not be able to satisfy the young lass in his hastiness. Let’s hope he doesn’t soil his knickers.

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    1. Lol, your comment is better than the story!

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      1. Not really, but it doesn’t add a possibility that we all hate to think about. 🙂

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  12. What about the nurses uniform – where’s his imagination? Naughty fun.

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  13. the duke and the ambulance have something in common. They’re always in a hurry and can’t slow down.

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  14. Very well done – I feared for the young maids virtue, till that last line of course. Clever.

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  15. Nice take on the prompt

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  16. Taking his clothes off? But a reservation would require him to come in his pants.

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  17. Ah, role play interruptus. No fun. That was cleverly written and very entertaining. The dirtier part of my mind (which is about 99% of it) wants you to finish the story in great detail. 🙂

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  18. I hope she ties him up and spanks him for his impatience. 😉

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  19. Such shenanigans! Fun story.

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  20. What Lorna said. great take on the prompt.

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