A Proper Poking

PHOTO PROMPT - © Rochelle Wisoff-Fields

PHOTO PROMPT – © Rochelle Wisoff-Fields

“I daresay, you should give it a poking.”

“What a saucy lass you are. Get on the bed and I shall give you a proper poking.”

Danielle fluttered her eyelids and hid her expression. The Duke’s attentions could mean an escape from the kitchen. Who knew? Maybe even nurse… and a room upstairs. But she had to keep his interest.

“Good sir, perhaps instead of the peaches, you’d prefer something sweeter.”

“And what do you recommend?”

“Perhaps a cherry?”

Below, an ambulance blared by the hotel and the Duke broke character. “Can we just get naked? Our reservation’s at 8:00.”


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  1. Playfully excellent, as always. Nice to see you back here.

  2. LOL – Didn’t expect that twist at the end there…Impatient Duke! Nicely done.

  3. LOL 😀 Damned ambulance. 😛

  4. A time schedule..how romantic..kind of like a poking.

  5. Alas for that poor lass.. the world is full of dukes in a hurry…

  6. Laughing out loud, literally! I’m not sure the poor lass will be quite as wiling to break character – just getting naked – takes all the fun out of it. 🙂

  7. micklively

    Economics and frolicking: never a good mix.

  8. Made me smile! The “duke” shouldn’t break out of the roleplay just because of ambulances and whatnot. What was he thinking? 🙂

  9. Excellent! Life intrudes rudely sometimes.

  10. Nothing like a little naughty role-playing to spice up the old marriage, huh? Cute! 😉

  11. The Duke seems a little excited. I hope it’s not premature to speculate that he may not be able to satisfy the young lass in his hastiness. Let’s hope he doesn’t soil his knickers.

    1. Lol, your comment is better than the story!

      1. Not really, but it doesn’t add a possibility that we all hate to think about. 🙂

  12. What about the nurses uniform – where’s his imagination? Naughty fun.

  13. the duke and the ambulance have something in common. They’re always in a hurry and can’t slow down.

  14. Very well done – I feared for the young maids virtue, till that last line of course. Clever.

  15. Nice take on the prompt

  16. Taking his clothes off? But a reservation would require him to come in his pants.

  17. Ah, role play interruptus. No fun. That was cleverly written and very entertaining. The dirtier part of my mind (which is about 99% of it) wants you to finish the story in great detail. 🙂

  18. I hope she ties him up and spanks him for his impatience. 😉

  19. Such shenanigans! Fun story.

  20. What Lorna said. great take on the prompt.

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