Sunday Photo Fiction prompt 10-25-2015
I think I like imaginary things the best.
Mr. Chocolate, The Threadbare Bear, and how he does his cooking show live from my Easy Bake oven.
Piggles the Flying Piggy Bank and the way he drops the moneybombs on Lego Town.
And my Sky Bike, Cartwheel, and the way we soar above the clouds, higher than the yelling. Singing songs at family pictures. And we fly all the way around the world. And when we get back, Mommy isn’t hurt or crying. And Daddy isn’t at the bar. And the rent is paid.
And we all love each other. Again.
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k. Rawson 
Splendid rhythm in this piece. Well done.
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Wonderfully heartbreaking.
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Thank you kindly!
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I love the way you can really capture the emotions of the piece
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Very kind of you. Thanks for reading!
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How bittersweet. I love it.
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Thanks & thanks for reading 🙂
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I almost read the last word as “Amen”, as if it were a prayer.
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Oooo I like that
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Oh yes! Masterful Flash Fiction! Strong emotions.
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Very kind of you, thanks for reading!
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I loved the randomness, great piece 🙂
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Thank you, Helen!
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This story takes us from fantasy to reality very quickly. Very skilful writing.
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Thank you Steve, and thanks for visiting 🙂
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Very good! I agree….the imaginary things are the best. 🙂
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Definitely. Thanks for reading and commenting 🙂
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Ohh.. if only..
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I love this! I also wrote my tale as a child. Fun to travel back to childhood now and again.
Check out my Photo Fiction!
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Thanks Rosey, I’m glad you liked it. I will check yours out!
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Very touching! I really like the ending.. ‘And we all love each other. Again” … 🙂
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Thanks for reading 🙂
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That’s awesome. I like the way you took it from playful to reality and hope.
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Thank so much!
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You’re welcome 🙂
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Heartbreaking story. It was an enjoyable read! 🙂
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Thank you!
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Just saw the “Sky Bike.” Terrific! JUST RIGHT.
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Thank you, I’m glad you liked it!
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Darn you. You make my heart hurt.
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Aw, I hope not in the bad way. Thanks Peter 🙂
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