What Would You Change About Me?

PHOTO PROMPT © Roger Bultot

PHOTO PROMPT © Roger Bultot

“That’s not how the game is played. You have to answer the question.” She sat back and clattered her freshly manicured nails on the Formica table.

He shifted on the seat and instead watched the steam rise from his coffee. “I don’t want to play.”

“Come on. It’ll be fun.”

He looked up. Her lipstick was smeared and the wrong color for her, she was wearing his shirt again. She’d ruined his favorite last week. Her side of the table was littered with torn sugar packets and a mosaic of  leftover breakfast.

“Okay fine. I’d change everything about you.”

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17 Comments

  1. rochellewisoff's avatar

    Dear Karen,

    Oops! I see this relationship headed for the skids. I really enjoyed this. By the way you describe her I can imagine what he’s like. Well done.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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  2. Russell J. Fellows's avatar

    Great story here…so many questions…lots of irresistible pulls into their minds to make you wonder…why?

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  3. Sandra's avatar

    Well she did ask… 😦

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  4. Fabricating Fiction/Louise Jensen's avatar

    I think we’ve all probably been in this situation!

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  5. Björn Rudberg (brudberg)'s avatar

    I have a feeling there was one thing that he wanted to keep….. his shirt (but maybe he would cut another loss and let her keep it)

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  6. Iain Kelly's avatar

    Well, if you’re going to ask that question, you’ve got to be prepared for an answer your not going to like! Fun take.

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  7. J Hardy Carroll's avatar

    Wonderful as always. So much for small talk, eh?

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  8. Mandibelle16's avatar
    mandibelle16

    Ouch! Since you forced it out of him, that’s what you get. Sometimes the truth can’t be concealed when it’s shouting to get out!

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  9. caerlynn's avatar
    Caerlynn Nash

    Yikes! You’ve created quite a vivid scene here. I suspect that in a year’s time, it may look a little different. Nice response to the prompt.

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  10. draliman's avatar

    Well, she did ask… 🙂

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  11. Alicia Jamtaas's avatar

    I don’t see them sitting at the same table for long.

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  12. TraceyDelaplainMD.com's avatar

    Like a helicopter crash…. I couldn’t look away. She should have seen that coming.
    Good one.

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  13. peterkirsch's avatar
    peterkirsch

    Bwahahahahahahahaha!

    Honesty’s a bitch.
    Sorry she insisted?

    Nice work.

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  14. The Reclining Gentleman's avatar

    Ouch! Don’t ask a question unless you’re SURE you want to hear the answer!

    Liked by 1 person

  15. subroto's avatar

    Ouch! She shouldn’t have insisted.

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  16. Dahlia's avatar

    Hahah – good one!

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