Big Top Tony

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“I know my rights!”

The kid was still yelling even as the cop tucked his head into the squad car. Tony took a long draw of his cigar and shook his head.

There was one of them at every stop, getting the other carnies all riled up. They’d go all union when they looked at their paycheck and saw the surcharges: meals, uniforms, lodging fees.  But they’d signed the contract

He crushed the cigar stub under a boot heel and walked away. In Barstow, he was getting illegals. Most of them couldn’t even read the checks, let alone cash them.

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35 Comments

  1. Hykeham Photography Group's avatar
    micklively

    Reminded me of “They Shoot Horses Don’t They?”.
    Good, if sinister, piece.

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  2. J Hardy Carroll's avatar

    Nicely told. No wonder they can’t afford dental work!

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  3. Sandra's avatar

    Sounds like ‘he da man’. It’s just that there are so many of them these days. Good take.

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    1. K. Rawson's avatar

      It seems he could benefit from some empathy! Thanks for reading Sandra.

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  4. M K Zebra's avatar

    A good reminder of what can be underneath fairground glitz…

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    1. K. Rawson's avatar

      That is true. Thanks for reading!

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  5. patrickprinsloo's avatar

    Love capitalism. It works!

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    1. K. Rawson's avatar

      Lol, it works for him, but probably is not the best example of it working for anyone else. Maybe next town he’ll change his tune…Thanks for reading and commenting!

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  6. paulmclem's avatar
    paulmclem

    Ah, looks like I wasn’t the only one to use the word “carnie”. Lol.

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  7. Priceless Joy's avatar

    Sounds like he is taking advantage of the “illegals.” Good story.

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    1. K. Rawson's avatar

      He is indeed. Thanks for visiting!

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  8. Björn Rudberg (brudberg)'s avatar

    Alas.. I guess none would pay enough for a fair fairground ..

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    1. K. Rawson's avatar

      This guy doesn’t seem to know much about fair. Thanks for visiting!

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  9. ЭSKI's avatar
    Francesca Smith

    Whichever system in place, if the person at the top recognises what power they possess, things go down hill pretty quickly.

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    1. K. Rawson's avatar

      Yes, or the guy needs some empathy and to think about something besides his own gains. Thanks for visiting Francesca!

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  10. Melanie's avatar
    Melanie

    Greed so often goes unchecked. Great story!

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    1. K. Rawson's avatar

      It does indeed. Thanks for reading 🙂

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  11. draliman's avatar

    Ooh, what a disreputable fellow! The dirt behind the glitz.

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  12. Claire Fuller's avatar

    Nice characterisation with that police officer.

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  13. GHLearner's avatar
    gahlearner

    I hope there’ll be a raid and he’ll pay dearly for the illegals. Exploitation has many faces, this Tony is one. Great story.

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  14. rochellewisoff's avatar

    Dear Karen,

    Tony sounds like a swell guy. I hope he chokes on his cigar. Well told.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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    1. K. Rawson's avatar

      Me too! Thanks Rochelle

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  15. empeck's avatar

    Well done. Great reminder of how badly employees get taken advantage of when employers have no accountability.

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    1. K. Rawson's avatar

      Very true. Thanks for reading and commenting!

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  16. Alicia Jamtaas's avatar

    What a creep. Out for the money.”Most of them couldn’t even read the checks, let alone cash them.” Makes my blood boil – in a good way.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. K. Rawson's avatar

      Thanks Alicia and thanks for reading!

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  17. The Writer's Village's avatar

    Definitely need a democrat like Bernie Sanders to deal with this.
    Randy

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    1. K. Rawson's avatar

      Feeling the Bern!

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  18. Dale's avatar
    Dale

    Tony is a schmuck. One day he’ll get his (or at least I hope so!)

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    1. K. Rawson's avatar

      I hope so too! Thanks for reading, Dale.

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  19. Russell Gayer's avatar

    We’re all replaceable, aren’t we? I know there’s a line of illegals out there just waiting to take over my blog and write some really funny stuff in a language you probably can’t read. I don’t know how they can afford to work for less than free—volume I guess.

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    1. K. Rawson's avatar

      You write for free??!! I have to pay to write (grumble, grumble). Thanks for reading and commenting 🙂

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  20. Suzanne Joshi's avatar

    Good story, Karen. It seems a carnival is a whole differnt world. Well done. — Suzanne

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  21. Inside the Mind of Isadora's avatar

    Carnies …. I guess they get their reputation from somewhere.
    Are you talking about Barstow, Florida?
    Good write …
    Isadora 😎

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